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A Story Within a Story

  • amandaborjon
  • May 30, 2020
  • 3 min read

Being a new mom I haven’t as much time as I would like to do something that I really enjoy. I take that back, there are quite a few things I find I do not have the time to enjoy but, I’m working on my time management. 


In fact, I’m writing this blog with the sweetest little baby girl fast asleep. It’s nap time. Her body is laying across me, pacifier still in her mouth, all is quiet except for the gentle sounds of her breathing. I love everything about her, the weight of her against me, the way she smells, and especially her sweaty little head on my arm. However, before I became a mom and had a lot more free time on my hands I would read books. I still love to read and hope I can pass the love of reading on to my daughter. Right now her favorite book is “Where is baby’s belly button?” By Karen Katz. It's a great interactive read and one I highly recommend. 


Another author I would like to highly recommend is Jim Bartlett. He is not an old family friend but, an amazing talent. What I love about Jim’s work is he writes short stories, which means it’s a lot easier for me to find the time to enjoy them and somehow they always seem to have an interesting twist at the end. Below is one of my favorites but, for more check him out at http://islandtales.net


Enjoy,

XOXO Amanda


The Escape 

by Jim Bartlett


Ahead she sees the first thin ribbons of sunlight breaking through the overhead branches and leaves, and it sparks hope that her trek through the dark forest might be finally coming to an end. Both her pace and heart quicken as the trail takes her up and down, weaves this way and that, each step heightening her expectation that the thicket will give way to a grassy plain, a rich valley, or maybe the vastness of the sea. But it’s not until she crests the ragged last ridge does the canopy of trees open up, exposing a sky so blue it steals away her breath, gives rise to goosebumps along her arm. She stops at the summit, turning her head into a slight breeze that carries a hint of ocean salt.


For a moment she almost can hear the waves, crashing against rocks and sand in a ritual that has carried forth since the dawn of time. But out of the corner of her eye something else calls her attention, and she turns back. On the far horizon, a single white cloud forms the backdrop to an ancient castle sitting atop an emerald green knoll. Each of its many towers boasts a flag, their colors brilliant, their emblems mysterious and yet inviting. The drawbridge is down, cutting a thick gray line across the inky black moat.

She again catches her breath. From deep inside a feeling, a familiar one at that, churns, and she knows something is about to happen. The trees behind her, the sky above, even the wind, settle in the silence of anticipation.

Then, the gate, a set of iron bars with sharp arrow tips at the top, begins to rise, the creak of its chains echoing across the canyon. A rider—a knight, his polished armor aglow in the midday sun--emerges, his horse a glossy back, its mane long and wild. The breath she held she finally releases in a gasp, as the horse and rider make their way across the bridge, a slow clump-clump of the horse’s hooves against the wood.


Yet, even with such a magnificent sight, another sound, this one far off in the distance, latches onto her ear. She turns, thinking at first it might be the long-horns of the neighboring kingdom, trumpeting in announcement of an approaching parade of horses ridden by knights in gray. She closes her eyes, imagining their gloved hands, how they hold their lances high, for their intent is to challenge the knight.

But, no, the sound is more distinct. A repetitive beeping. Persistent. Annoying. Her shoulders slump, her head drops, for it is only then she realizes her phone, set to go off at the end of her lunch, is performing its task.

With a heavy sigh, she marks her page, folds the book closed, and makes her way back to her desk.

1 comentario


georgebo1955
31 may 2020

Great story! Love to read your Blogs. ❤️💚

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